The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of
people
with college degrees and the employment rate with annual income in eight European countries
in 2015.
Overall
, Norway
had the highest yearly average salaries with almost 41500 while
Bulgaria had the lowest with exactly 3332, respectively. Moreover
, UK
had the second Correct article usage
the UK
high
annual income after Correct word choice
highest
Norway
with approximately 41500. In regard to citizens who work, Norway
,UK
and Austria seemed to Correct article usage
the UK
be
the highest Verb problem
have
in
employment Change preposition
apply
rate
with 74.8% , 72,7% and 71.1% . Fix the agreement mistake
rates
On the contrary
, Greece is the lowest country in Europe with properly 50% of the people
work
there. Wrong verb form
working
According to
the countries
with university education, Norway
, UK
and Luxembourg are the most Correct article usage
the UK
countries
with proportion
43.2%,41,6% and 41.1% Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
while
Portugal is the least
percentage in Correct word choice
lowest
people
education with only 22.9%.
In general, countries
which had the highest numbers of people
with college degrees are the most paid in average income.Submitted by 361109698 on
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