The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the
production
levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK during the period between 1981 and 2000.
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Overall
, the UK produced petroleum Linking Words
in
the highest Change preposition
at
level
. In the first ten years, the Use synonyms
production
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level
of coal was still higher than natural Use synonyms
gas
, except for 1984. But Use synonyms
then
after 1991, natural Linking Words
gas
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start
to be produced more than coal, and the gap between those two Wrong verb form
started
production
levels was getting wider and wider.
It is certain that petroleum was always the most popular fuel to produce in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Petroleum Use synonyms
production
's image fluctuates between 90 and 140 Use synonyms
energy
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units
. It reached the highest point in 1999 with a number of about 143, Use synonyms
while
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that is
90 Linking Words
energy
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units
for the lowest point in 1981.
Coal Use synonyms
production
, starting at the Use synonyms
level
of 80 Use synonyms
energy
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units
, Use synonyms
it
first went flat, Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
sharply decreased. After a year, it increased to the Linking Words
level
of 60 Use synonyms
units
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,
and slowly Remove the comma
apply
being
produced less and less after 1989.
Beginning with less than 40, natural Unnecessary verb
apply
gas
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production
remained basically stable until 1990 when it slowly increased. In 2000, natural Use synonyms
gas
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production
arrived at the highest point, which is a few more than 100 Use synonyms
energy
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units
.Use synonyms
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