The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. 

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates
distribution
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the distribution
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between different age groups in New
Zeland
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Zealand
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from 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, it could be seen that during one year statistics did not change dramatically, but there were slight changes. It could be seen that age segments from 15 to 39 years and from 40 to 64 years are much
biggeer
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bigger
than other ones.
While
the
group
of people under 15 is twice
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as smaller
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smaller
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small
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than
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as
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middle-aged
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the middle-aged
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segment and the
group
of
eldery
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elderly
people older than 65 is three times less populated than
15
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the 15
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-39
group
, the 40-64
group
is about 10-15 percent smaller. Turning to the time changes during the
one yaer
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one-year
period, it could be noticed that the highest income was in the oldest
group
equalled
to
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apply
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4%.
This
value
higlights
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highlights
from
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apply
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others because
differencies
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differences
at
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in
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other groups are less than 1% and categories under 40 are having
slight
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a slight
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decrease
at
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apply
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all
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. Taking
all
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it all
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together, it can be seen that
total
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the total
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population increased a bit, but
closer
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a closer
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look
to
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at
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the table tells
that
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us that
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is caused by the
least
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last
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group
represented
at
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in
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the table.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age group
  • increase
  • decline
  • elderly population
  • aging population
  • working-age population
  • stable labor force
  • modest increase
  • significant change
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