In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is controversy about whether substantial salaries would benefit society at large or it is an issue that needs to be addressed.

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acknowledge the benefits of equality,

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believe the drawbacks imposed by it pale

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benefits. Controlling one's income can benefit both individuals and society at large.

Firstly

, it can discourage people from sacrificing their whole lives for the sake of climbing the career ladder. People believe they can buy happiness;

thus

, they sacrifice their personal interests and precious time working for extended hours in order to earn a substantial amount of money.

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mentality not only causes detrimental health problems

such

as depression and anxiety but

also

disrupts the harmonious balance between working and recreational pursuits.

Therefore

, imposing a salary ceiling can motivate individuals toward a more balanced lifestyle through which they can earn satisfaction and be productive in the workplace.

Moreover

, it is said that

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wage ceiling offers an equitable distribution of salaries, ultimately minimizing the gap between the poor and the rich.

This

diminished gap discourages disadvantaged households from stealing and other unhealthy habits in order to generate revenue and provide a chance for them to study and get tertiary degrees.

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them a job with

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salary to steer clear

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deliquencies

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delinquencies

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However

, limiting one's income not only dissuades individuals from working hard but

also

increases the potential risk of higher delinquencies. High-salary jobs bring about competition between candidates, necessitating them to work with their optimal mental and physical force; limiting it,

however

, guarantees them the reward for less effort.

This

approach would decelerate developments and mundane jobs would dominate the job market, leaving demanding jobs with inadequate workforce.

Secondly

, humankind would search for happiness as the primary need for existence.

Therefore

, as people fall short of receiving the adrenaline rush from higher salaries in the workplace, the rate of delinquencies and unhealthy behaviours

such

as smoking and excessive sexual relationships increase to compensate for the lost joy.

However

,

this

futile manner only feeds depression and causes

further

repercussions,

such

as addiction, that would be hard to tackle. In conclusion, minimizing the salary gap can be beneficial;

however

, its downturns outweigh equivalent income distribution.