The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey about
people
's coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits in five cities
in Australia.
Overall
, it is showed
from the chart that the percentage of Wrong verb form
shown
people
going to a cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks is higher in general than other habits. While
the fewest people
prefer to buy fresh coffee
during this
period.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the proportion of people
who prefer to go to a cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks in Melboune
and Hobart are around 64% and 63% respectively, which are similar and the highest among all other figures. Correct your spelling
Melbourne
While in
Adelaide, the percentage of Correct word choice
In
this
habit is the lowest, standing at just under 50%, which is similar with
the share of Change preposition
to
people
buying instant coffee
, and is around twice as much as the figure for buying fresh coffee
throughout the period in the same city.
It is also
clear from the chart that although
the fewest people
buy fresh coffee
in all cities
, different cities
have different numbers about this
habit. In Brisbane and Adelaide, figures for this
habit are similar, accounting for around 34.5%. In Sydney, by contrast
, the percentage of buying fresh coffee
represent
about 44%, which is higher than in all other Change the verb form
represents
cities
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