The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey about
people
's
coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits in five
cities
in Australia.
Overall
, it is
showed
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shown
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from the chart that the percentage of
people
going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks is higher in general than other habits.
While
the fewest
people
prefer to buy fresh
coffee
during
this
period. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the proportion of
people
who prefer to go to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks in
Melboune
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Melbourne
and Hobart are around 64% and 63% respectively, which are similar and the highest among all other figures.
While in
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In
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Adelaide, the percentage of
this
habit is the lowest, standing at just under 50%, which is similar
with
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the share of
people
buying instant
coffee
, and is around twice as much as the figure for buying fresh
coffee
throughout the period in the same city. It is
also
clear from the chart that
although
the fewest
people
buy fresh
coffee
in all
cities
, different
cities
have different numbers about
this
habit. In Brisbane and Adelaide, figures for
this
habit are similar, accounting for around 34.5%. In Sydney,
by contrast
, the percentage of buying fresh
coffee
represent
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about 44%, which is higher than in all other
cities
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, cities with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee consumption
  • tea consumption
  • shopping habits
  • demographic factors
  • preference trends
  • price sensitivity
  • convenience
  • per capita
  • restaurateurs
  • beverage industry
  • consumer behavior
  • market analysis
  • quantitative data
  • qualitative analysis
  • trend analysis
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • seasonal variations
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