The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.

The pie charts show the numbers and percentages of men and

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in both full-time and part-time employment in the UK in 1988 and 2012.

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, we can see that all numbers increased but there were significant differences in the proportions for each year.

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of men in full-time employment was

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in both years, the greatest change was in the

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women

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working full-time.

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increased from 4,482,000 in 1988 to 7,696,000 in 2012. These changes can be seen in the percentages of the total workforce; in 1988,

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in full-time employment made up only 19% of working people, but

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increased to 26% in 2012.

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of people working full-time, the

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of people working part-time

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increased, with

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being the largest

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in both years: 5,268,000 and 5,979,000, compared with 1,550,000 and 2,131,000 for men.

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The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.

It was predicted that people living in the twenty-first century would have more free time than ever before because of improvements in technology. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Some people believe that education in all its stages should be free to everyone, while others think that university education should be paid for by the people who want it. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

Disruptive school children have negative influence on others. students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view