WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
Firstly
, the graphic gives information regarding number
of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. After that we have three categories ‘The coast, The Change the article
a number
the number
mountains
, The lakes’. Than
we have five years. These are 1987, 1992, 1997, 2002 and 2007.
Replace the word
Then
Secondly
, when we look at the table The mountains
has
much rate is 35 in 2002 and 2007. Change the verb form
have
Also
The lakes Add a comma
Also,
has
much ratio is 75 in 2002. The Wrong verb form
had
mountais
Correct your spelling
mountains
mountain
is
less than The lakes. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Furthermore
The coast
Correct your spelling
cost
has
less rate is 35 in 1992. As an extra the most less rate is 10 in 1987.
Wrong verb form
had
Tirdly
, the chart which is above mentioned describes selecting and reporting the main features, and Correct your spelling
Thirdly
make
comparisons where relevant. From my point of view, I strongly believe that the most high rates are The coast and The Wrong verb form
making
mountains
. Later on
the most nominal ratios are The Add a comma
on,
mountains
and The lakes. These ratios are 10 and 20 in 1987 between 1997.Submitted by eylulelveren7 on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mountains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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