WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

You should write at least 150 words.
Firstly
, the graphic gives information regarding
number
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a number
the number
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of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. After that we have three categories ‘The coast, The
mountains
, The lakes’.
Than
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Then
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we have five years. These are 1987, 1992, 1997, 2002 and 2007.
Secondly
, when we look at the table The
mountains
has
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have
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much rate is 35 in 2002 and 2007.
Also
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Also,
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The lakes
has
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had
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much ratio is 75 in 2002. The
mountais
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mountains
mountain
is
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are
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less than The lakes.
Furthermore
The
coast
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cost
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has
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had
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less rate is 35 in 1992. As an extra the most less rate is 10 in 1987.
Tirdly
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Thirdly
, the chart which is above mentioned describes selecting and reporting the main features, and
make
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comparisons where relevant. From my point of view, I strongly believe that the most high rates are The coast and The
mountains
. Later
on
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on,
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the most nominal ratios are The
mountains
and The lakes. These ratios are 10 and 20 in 1987 between 1997.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mountains with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.

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