The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart depicts the 4 undermining factors why cultivated
land
becomes unproductive, while
the table illustrates how such
factors contributed to land
degradation
in 3 distinct regions during the 1990s.
To commence, over-grazing was the predominant factor that caused agricultural land
to become less productive, accounting for 35% of the total. This
was followed by deforestation and over-cultivation with almost identical percentages at 29% on each issue. In contrast
, the other problem was approximately 28% less compared to over-grazing, indicating a remarkable disparity.
On the other hand
, by the 1990s, regarding causes of land
degradation
by region, deforestation had destroyed 9.8% of land
in Europe
, while
in Oceania and North America
, the percentages were relatively low, at 1.7% and 0.2% respectively. Moreover
, though 7.7% of land
in Europe
and 3.3% of land
in North America
had become less productive due to
over-cultivation, Oceania's land
was unaffected by over-cultivation. Additionally
, 11.3% of Oceania’s land
was destroyed by over-grazing, while
this
issue only destroyed less than half of Oceania’s in North America
and Europe
. Consequently
, Europe
was the region with the highest percentage of total land
degradation
(23%), followed by Oceania at 13% and North America
at 5%.
To encapsulate, though over-grazing was the dominant underlying issue that caused worldwide land
degradation
, Europe
was the most degraded among other regions.Submitted by rasendrya.hafiz on
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