You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this the case, and what solutions are possible?

Nowaday

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Nowadays

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, the environment is threatened by the increase in commodity

production

to meet market demands leading to a lot of consequences.

Therefore

, to overcome the serious consequences which are caused by the manufacturing industry, we need to clarify the

causes

and come up with optimal measures. First and foremost, the increase in commodity consumption

causes

many harmful effects in terms of land, air and water pollution.

Firstly

, indiscriminate littering and mineral exploitation to serve

production

lead to pollution and soil erosion.

Additionally

, poaching wild animals to do animal experiments for cosmetic

production

causes

ecological imbalance, pushing many animal species into danger of extinction.

Secondly

, factories do not meet wastewater treatment procedures and illegal toxic waste disposal,

dumping

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untreated sewage directly into rivers and lakes are

also

one

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some

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of the major

causes

of water pollution, affecting household water sources .

Finally

, heavy reliance on fossil fuels for

production

causes

poisonous fumes,

reduced

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air quality which is the main cause leading to global warming and greenhouse gas

emission

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emissions

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.

Secondly

, to overcome the consequences caused by

production

, effective solutions are needed.

Firstly

, the government needs to take drastic action

such

as

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enacting

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laws,

impose

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imposing

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a limitation for a level which is acceptable and

issue

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issuing

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a fine level to control

commercial

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the commercial

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exploitation of natural resources.

Moreover

, businesses need to implement environmental discharge regulations to move towards green-minded businesses.

Finally

, individuals, it is necessary to actively participate in environmental protection activities, plant trees, throw trash in the right place, and recycle plastic bottles many times. In conclusion, increasing

production

to meet increasing market demand

causes

impacts on the environment.

Hence

, we need to take practical actions to protect the environment.