life in the futureHow do You think life will look like ?

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I
bealive
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believe
that life in the future will be
vry
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very
different
then
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these days. We will be living in the flats as
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will be extremely
luxury
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. Our modern homes will be full of modern technology and
mostlikely
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most likely
micro living
type
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types
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. Work can be done online from home as
this
trend happening already now.Modern cities should
accomodate
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accommodate
much more citizens and follow green sources of heat and electricity.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure to have a clear introduction and conclusion in your essay. Introduce the topic and summarize your main points at the end.
task achievement
Develop your ideas with more detailed explanations or examples to enhance the clarity and depth of your response.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and ensure smooth transitions between them.
task achievement
The essay successfully introduces several futuristic concepts, such as micro-living and online work, showing a good understanding of potential future trends.
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Mentions a focus on sustainability in future urban development, which is a relevant and important consideration.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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