Society has different views about the development of
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science which is predicted to help individuals live longer
while
others deny these benefits. There are some strong arguments in support of
this
new advancement of medical science, but I believe that living up to 150 years will
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influence on the community.
People
support immortality for several reasons.
Firstly
, human beings would have no regrets about their strong desires
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accomplishments.
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people
can do what they have not done before in their hardworking days
due to
a big dream of success in the future
life
.
Thus
, longevity assists humankind to live
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the successful period by completing unfinished ambitions. To substantiate it, here is an epitome of entrepreneurs who worked hard to reach
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of their career afterwards, they tend to stay achievements for longer to live in that pinnacle.
In spite of the above arguments, I agree that
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life
and satisfaction
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what a person holds is much better than
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subsistence without meaning and significance.
Furthermore
, humankind has certain limitations as organs would not remain
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in all phases of
life
. During adult ages,
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and it is hard to provide proper care, especially
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or she
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from bad health or weak resistance. Even though
people
will able to receive extra-ordinary facilities, brain health
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not be changed.
In addition
, surviving too prolonged only brings morbidity and
this
will create heavy burdens on the government. There would be
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to allocate more expenditures and
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of older
people
will indirectly affect the growth rate of developing countries as their limited resources will be spent on old age care
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.
Overall
, it
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to me that
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dangers of living
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life
are more significant than
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merits.
Thus
, I still argue that
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entire
life
is far better than expecting
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of
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150 years.