You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is argued that trough all over the world, the

move

of rural population to agglomerations induces a drop in

countryside’s

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the countryside’s

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inhabitants.

This

essay agrees with the fact that it might be a positive phenomenon. Many

people

from the rural zone, especially in industrial countries,

use

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to leave their native

home

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homes

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for great cities, looking for opportunities and for a more comfortable

life

. Indeed, since the

industrial revolution

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Industrial Revolution

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, cities

got

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developed dramatically, in many aspects of

life

, and the need

of

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for

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a huge workforce to fulfil the need

of

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for

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factories

,

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induced these movements.

It is clear that

every human being has the right to make his own

life’s

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life

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choices and long for a better and affluent

life

.

This

change for rural

people

allows them to escape from poverty and witnesses a nosedive in the rate of joblessness.

For instance

, in the early 1920s ,workers in Casablanca

city

, Morocco, used to come from the rural area surrounding the

city

in order to

labor

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labour

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and make their

life

better. A significant part of them could take

the

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advantage of that

move

,

thus

, improving their social situations. If several inhabitants from the countryside emigrate to agglomerations, there are still a lot that are convinced by their lifestyle and refuse categorically to abandon their peace of land.

Furthermore

, some

people

do the opposite and, in a perspective of changing their mode of

life

, try to settle in small towns far from the stressful atmosphere of cities and the high cost of living. For these matters, an overwhelming reduction in

rural

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the rural

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population rate is unexpected. Casablanca

city

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City

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is ,once again, a perfect example to illustrate the prior idea. In fact, numerous wealthy citizens decided in the

last

decade to

move

on to rural areas, surrounding the

city

, to take benefit from the low prices in flats and houses

as well as

the comfort brought by nature. In conclusion, the

move

of rural population to urban areas is definitely a positive trend witnessed these

last

years.

This

change may help

people

improving

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their social standings and reduce unemployment and poverty in our modern society. In spite of

this

trend, many others prefer to stay in the countryside or

move

to small towns for diverse reasons.