The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates, the proportion of the sector contributions to
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gross domestic product for over four decades.
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, it can be seen that the percentage of agriculture went down,
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went up.
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agriculture was one
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main contributors for over 3 decades ,
however
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the
last
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10
years
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services
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were the main gross domestic product in India. On the one hand , the
persentage
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percentage
of agriculture started at just over 60% in 1960 and it was the main GDP for 30
years
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.
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then
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decreased slightly every year and
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a bottom
to
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around 15 % in
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years
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.
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,
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and
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in India the rate increased over 3 decades (around 25% and 28 % respectively).
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, the industry stood
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25% final
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,
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increased rapidly and
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the
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peak
about
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63 % in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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