The graph below shows the percentages of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentages of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the several ordinary things of technology in the U.S. between 1995 and 1999—in percentages.
Overall
, every household—washing machine, computer, phone, internet, and DVD player—has an upward trend. In the first
period
, washing machines comprised above 60%
then
it went up over the
period
. In 1999, it remained at around 80%.
Similarly
, computers made up around 40% in the initial
year
. Between 1995 and 1999, it slightly increased over the
period
then
it stayed below 70%.
Moreover
,
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stood at approximately 10% in 1995. Afterwards, it rose minimally over the
year
.
However
, in the final
year
, it remained under 50%. In the first
year
, the percentage of phones
comprised
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below 20%. Afterwards, it rose significantly. In 1999, it stayed above 70%.
Furthermore
, in 1995, the DVD player stood at roughly 25%, but it dropped in 1996. Until 1996, it
grow
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sharply
in
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each
year
.
At the end
of the
period
, it remained at around 40%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • households
  • percentages
  • technologies
  • general trend
  • increased
  • decreased
  • growth rates
  • older technologies
  • newer technologies
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • surpassing
  • advances
  • consumer preferences
  • economic factors
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