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Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter: - describe the noisy behavior of your neighbor, - explain how it is affecting you, - suggest a solution to this problem.

#manager #behavior #neighbor
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Vlad and I am
tenant
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a tenant
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 of your building. I am writing to you regarding a small issue with extra noise
form
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from
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 people who living
at
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in
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 the right
appartment
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apartment
. First of all, the person who
living
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 close to me
soo
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is so
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 young and
this
is tend
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tends
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 to be a problem, because he
is
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has
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 invited a lot of people for
party
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a party
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 night or something like that.
Moreover
,
high
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the high
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valume
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volume
value
 of music prevents us from relaxing after working
shift
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.
Therefore
,
due to
this
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these
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inconvinians
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inconvenient
, I was tired before work and it
is reduce
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 my productivity during the day.
Besides
 that, my manager
give
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 me a penalty, because I
spand
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spend
spent
 more time
to solve
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solving
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a simple problems
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simple problems
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 than usual.
However
, after
short
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a short
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conversetion
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conversation
 with
this
 man, I
could't
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couldn't
 find other option
then
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than
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 writing to you. You should invite him to your main office and
discussed
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discuss
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 about
noice
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noise
 or organise a
meating
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meeting
 with
him
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his
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 parents in the future. I am looking forward
for
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to
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 hearing from you. Yours sincerely Vlad Ik.
Submitted by vladislavikonnikov112 on

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coherence cohesion
Logical sequence of ideas is generally followed.
coherence cohesion
Both greeting and closing are appropriate for the task.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task.

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