Practice Questions: nThe graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat.

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The line graph illustrates the sum of money

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expended

expense

expende

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spent

on books in four countries,

germany

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, France, Italy and Austria,

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Practice Questions: nThe graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat.

The topic of this: Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Inspite of the advantages made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem?

homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it ?