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Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the sum of
money
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expended
Verb problem
spent
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 on
books
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among
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between
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 1995 and 2005 in four countries,
germany
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Germany
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,
France
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, Italy and Austria.
Overall
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, All
the
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apply
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four
counries
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countries
remain
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have
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upward
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an upward
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 trend in
spent
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spending
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money
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of
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on
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the
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apply
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books
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 throughout the years between 1995
to
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and
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 2005.
However
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,
the
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apply
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Germaney
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Germany
 had the much expended compared
the
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to the
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 other
counries
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countries
, In 1995 spent on
books
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 80
millions
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million
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dollars
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 and the number
remain
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remained
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 steady until 2005
increase
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increased
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 to over 95
millions
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million
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dollars
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,
While
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 Austria at
the
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apply
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first
was
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apply
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spent less of
money
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, the amount in 1995 was 30 million
dollars
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 and the number rose significantly in 2005 to above 70 million
dollars
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. As for Italy and
France
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 the sum of spent
the
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apply
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money
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 was the same relatively,
whereas
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the
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apply
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France
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slightly
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was slightly
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 higher than Italy in 2005,
France
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 spent
am
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an
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 amount
71
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of 71
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 million
dollars
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. in conclusion, the rate of
spent
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spending
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the
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apply
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money
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 on
books
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 in the four
counries
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countries
counties
remain
Verb problem
has
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rose
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risen
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 in recent years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, books, france, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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