The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate the differences that happened to the
town
of Westly since 1815 and what the
town
gone
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went
has gone
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through in
this
period. In the beginning, Westly
town
had a huge amount of
lands
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land
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which were only fields and woods . In 1815, citizens
have
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had
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only
few
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a few
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places to visit
such
as the church and market square.
In addition
,Houses were placed in the middle of the
town
next to the
town
hall. Lord
westly's
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Westly's
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house was on the right along the road headed to Tinton village. There was a Twin Toll Bridge which connected people of the
town
to London. In regard to the changes that
done
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have been
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throughout the years.
Railway
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The railway
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was built next to the city and
pass
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passed
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over the River twine.
Moreover
, houses were destroyed and built
bussiness
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business
and residential
area
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areas
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instead
.
Additionaly
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Additionally
, more facilities were built
such
as
museum
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a museum
the museum
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, sports centre and West
gate
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Gate
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shopping Centre which will increase the
tourists
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tourist's
tourists'
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growth in the
town
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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