The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the differences that happened to the

town

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of Westly since 1815 and what the

town

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gone

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went

has gone

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through in

this

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period. In the beginning, Westly

town

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had a huge amount of

lands

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land

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which were only fields and woods . In 1815, citizens

have

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had

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only

few

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a few

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places to visit

such

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as the church and market square.

In addition

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,Houses were placed in the middle of the

town

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next to the

town

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hall. Lord

westly's

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Westly's

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house was on the right along the road headed to Tinton village. There was a Twin Toll Bridge which connected people of the

town

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to London. In regard to the changes that

done

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have been

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throughout the years.

Railway

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The railway

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was built next to the city and

pass

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passed

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over the River twine.

Moreover

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, houses were destroyed and built

bussiness

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business

and residential

area

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areas

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instead

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Additionaly

Correct your spelling

Additionally

, more facilities were built

such

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museum

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a museum

the museum

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, sports centre and West

gate

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Gate

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shopping Centre which will increase the

tourists

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tourist's

tourists'

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growth in the

town

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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