The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate the differences that happened to the
town
of Westly since 1815 and what the town
gone
through in Add the auxiliary verb
went
has gone
this
period.
In the beginning, Westly town
had a huge amount of lands
which were only fields and woods . In 1815, citizens Fix the agreement mistake
land
have
only Wrong verb form
had
few
places to visit Change the article
a few
such
as the church and market square. In addition
,Houses were placed in the middle of the town
next to the town
hall. Lord westly's
house was on the right along the road headed to Tinton village. There was a Twin Toll Bridge which connected people of the Change the capitalization
Westly's
town
to London.
In regard to the changes that done
throughout the years. Wrong verb form
have been
Railway
was built next to the city and Correct article usage
The railway
pass
over the River twine. Wrong verb form
passed
Moreover
, houses were destroyed and built bussiness
and residential Correct your spelling
business
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
instead
. Additionaly
, more facilities were built Correct your spelling
Additionally
such
as museum
, sports centre and West Add an article
a museum
the museum
gate
shopping Centre which will increase the Capitalize word
Gate
tourists
growth in the Change to a genitive case
tourist's
tourists'
town
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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