The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and 2018
The bar chart details the
percentage
rate of families in a country spent on their weekly income
from the year 1968 to 2018. In overall
perspective, food has been on the lead for the most families expenses in percentage
for the year 1968. Both data seems
to have a complimentary stable Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
percentage
amongst all aspects
.
In the year of
1968, a significant difference appeared between food and all other Change preposition
apply
aspects
with it having the highest expenses with 35% of weekly income
used. The lowest percentage
lies within fuel and power as it took a little above 5% of income
. There is a well
similarity between household Change the adverb
good
goods
, personal goods
, transport, and leisure as all of those aspects
mentioned took just below 10% of the families
Change noun form
family's
families'
income
. A number of 10% weekly
Change preposition
of weekly
income
was used for housing, clothing, and footwear.
On the other hand
, in 2018, there is no steep difference between all of the aspects
. The highest number of income
used was for leisure as it has just above 20% of weekly income
, followed by housing and food with just below 20% and transport with relatively close to 15%. The rest of the aspects
including fuel, clothing and footwear, personal goods
, and household goods
are on a lower percentage
line ranging from less than 5% to just under 10%.Submitted by hnnfh
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, income, aspects, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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