The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and 2018

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and 2018
The bar chart details the
percentage
rate of families in a country spent on their weekly
income
from the year 1968 to 2018. In
overall
perspective, food has been on the lead for the most families expenses in
percentage
for the year 1968. Both data
seems
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seem
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to have a complimentary stable
percentage
amongst all
aspects
. In the year
of
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1968, a significant difference appeared between food and all other
aspects
with it having the highest expenses with 35% of weekly
income
used. The lowest
percentage
lies within fuel and power as it took a little above 5% of
income
. There is a
well
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good
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similarity between household
goods
, personal
goods
, transport, and leisure as all of those
aspects
mentioned took just below 10% of the
families
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family's
families'
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income
. A number of 10%
weekly
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of weekly
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income
was used for housing, clothing, and footwear.
On the other hand
, in 2018, there is no steep difference between all of the
aspects
. The highest number of
income
used was for leisure as it has just above 20% of weekly
income
, followed by housing and food with just below 20% and transport with relatively close to 15%. The rest of the
aspects
including fuel, clothing and footwear, personal
goods
, and household
goods
are on a lower
percentage
line ranging from less than 5% to just under 10%.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, income, aspects, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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