The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five British cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the outcome
about
the habits of buying and drinking Change preposition
of
tea
and coffee
by citizens who live in London
, Coventry
, Wales
, Sheffield
, and Oxford
.
Overall
, the proportion of people
who bought fresh coffee
is the lowest in each five cities. Except for in Sheffield
, the proportion of going to a cafe for coffee
or tea
is the highest in the rest of four
cities in the British region.
In terms of the percentage of buying fresh Correct article usage
the four
coffee
in each city, it is over 40% in London
(around 44%) and Coventry
(around 42%). In Wales
, Sheffield
, and Oxford
, there were less
Change the quantifier
fewer
people
Correct pronoun usage
who prefer
prefer
buying fresh Wrong verb form
preferred
coffee
than London
and Change preposition
in London
Coventry
, which is about 36%, 34% and 38% respectively.
Second,in Sheffield
, there were 50% citizens
prefer to buy instant Change preposition
of citizens
coffee
, which is more than buying fresh coffee
(around 33%) and going to a cafe for coffee
or tea
(around 38%). The proportion of people
who bought instant coffee
in London
and Coventry
is about 45% and 48%. Furthermore
, the portion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
people
live
in Wrong verb form
living
Wales
(around 53%) and Oxford
(around 57%) is higher 50
%.
Change preposition
than 50
Lastly
, in Sheffield
, the percentage of citizens who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
is about 38%. However
, in the rest of the four cities, London
, Coventry
, Wales
, and Oxford
, is much higher than 60%, which is approximately 61%,63%,57%, and 64% respectively.Submitted by aksoysana on
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