TASK1 The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. (Bell Hill Farm in 1976 Bill Hill Environmental Centre 2006) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Instructions to follow • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task • Write at least 150 words
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The maps compare the changes made in Environment Centre in 2006, which was Bell Hill
Farm
back in 1976. Overall
, there were some significant transformations in the use of land except for farmhouse
which remained unchanged over the given period.
The Fix the agreement mistake
farmhouses
farm
in 1976 the whole parts were used solely for farming and plantation. The farm
machinery was located in the western area to the left side of the street. Next to it was the barn which used to store crops such
as corns
. The farmyard occupied the centre part of the map and cow sheds Fix the agreement mistake
corn
was
on its right. The farmhouse was located Correct subject-verb agreement
were
at
the southern part and to its right was Change preposition
in
chicken
barn.
Bell Hill Add an article
a chicken
the chicken
Farm
was transformed into Environment
Centre in 2006. The parking lot took its space where the Correct article usage
an Environment
farm
machinery used to be. Furthermore
, the barn was replaced to
Change preposition
with
multimedia
room and the farmyard Add an article
the multimedia
a multimedia
turned
into a recreation area. Add a missing verb
was turned
Moreover
, the cow sheds were changed to student housing. The place for chicken was completely demolished. However
, the farmhouse was still available to visit.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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