TASK1 The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. (Bell Hill Farm in 1976 Bill Hill Environmental Centre 2006) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Instructions to follow • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task • Write at least 150 words

TASK1 

The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. (Bell Hill Farm in 1976 Bill Hill Environmental Centre 2006) 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Instructions to follow 

• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task 

• Write at least 150 words
The maps compare the changes made in Environment Centre in 2006, which was Bell Hill
Farm
back in 1976.
Overall
, there were some significant transformations in the use of land except for
farmhouse
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farmhouses
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which remained unchanged over the given period. The
farm
in 1976 the whole parts were used solely for farming and plantation. The
farm
machinery was located in the western area to the left side of the street. Next to it was the barn which used to store crops
such
as
corns
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corn
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. The farmyard occupied the centre part of the map and cow sheds
was
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were
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on its right. The farmhouse was located
at
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in
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the southern part and to its right was
chicken
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a chicken
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barn. Bell Hill
Farm
was transformed into
Environment
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an Environment
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Centre in 2006. The parking lot took its space where the
farm
machinery used to be.
Furthermore
, the barn was replaced
to
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with
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multimedia
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the multimedia
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room and the farmyard
turned
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was turned
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into a recreation area.
Moreover
, the cow sheds were changed to student housing. The place for chicken was completely demolished.
However
, the farmhouse was still available to visit.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words farm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • ecological preservation
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • educational facilities
  • recreational use
  • agricultural productivity
  • environmental education
  • farm infrastructure
  • visitor centre
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