The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the popularity of
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the range
range
from Yemen and Italy in the years of
2000 and 2025.
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Overall
, the population of Yemen and Italy saw significan
distribution in ages, Correct your spelling
significant
while
Yemen’s population tend to be progessively
younger, Italy Correct your spelling
progressively
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aging
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ageing
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.
Initially
, the range
between the range
15-59
in Yemen managed to be the biggest and passed more than 60 around 20%. The people below 15 Correct word choice
and 59
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accounted for only a minor percentage (5,7%) of the total Unnecessary verb
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2050
.
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in 2050
On the other hand
, in Italy, proportions for both has
an opposite tendency, Correct subject-verb agreement
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while
15
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the 15
range
had steadily over 50 years from 61% in 2000 to only 46%, and over over 60 range
rised
significantly by that, from approximately 24% to peak at 43%. Correct your spelling
raised
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, there was fluctated
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range
from both country
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