The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. Write a report of at least 150 words summarizing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. Write a report of at least 150 words summarizing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The presented line chart compares data about how many people watched TV for news in 12 months per million.
Overall
it was important that all over the time the 6 p.m. news was more popular than the others;
moreover
, 9:30 p.m. and 6 p.m.
instead
of others had a rising trend.
According to
the diagram, at the start, 6 pm, the main time that people spent their time listening to, hit nearly 4.8;
then
its fashion moved rapidly and reduced to the minimum point at roughly 3.1 in November;
thereafter
, it increased to almost 3.2 in December. The second item was 9:30 pm;
additionally
, it was approximately 3.1in January after that, it climbed slightly and hit vertex at 3.8 in May;
however
, it declined significantly to the lowest mark at 1 in August;
although
, it jumped to 3 in the
last
month of the year. The graph demonstrates that at 1pm, the third factor, viewers roughly stabilised and touched about 1.2. The
last
part was 11 pm, which played from May to December.
In addition
, in the beginning, it was just over zero. Later it leapt overwhelmingly and peaked at 4 in August;
nevertheless
, it dipped considerably to 1 in December.
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