the chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

the

chart

below shows the advantages between the regions (

USA

-Eruope-

Asia

) of their sales between 2002

till

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and

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2006, the

chart

also

illustrated the fluctuation in percentages especially in the

USA

and

Asia

while

approximately the same average in Europe,

also

the

chart

showed the peak

point

at 41% in the

USA

and the low

point

at 25% in

Asia

. From 2002 till 2004 the

chart

clarified

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the percentage in

Asia

gradually increased from 25% in 2002 till the percentage reached 35% in 2004

while

the percentage of the

USA

decreased from 41% to 27% in 2004,

main

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while

Europe was quite the same average with 30% unless reached the peak

point

in 2004 with only 38%

on the other hand

in

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from

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2005 till 2006 the

chart

showed a light

rising

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in the

USA

from 29% to 30%, and a sharp

increasing

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in

Asia

from 37% to 40% until reached the peak

point

at 40% ,

while

a sharp decline in the

USA

from 34%to30.