The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The charts provide key information about present years between 18 to 25 watching TV in 2009 and 2019. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that conventional TV took the highest score in 2009.
In addition
, conventional TV took 34% in 2009 and only 4% in 2019,
whereas
, tablets increased from 5% in 2009 to 19% in 2019
also
mobile phones did not change so much it was only increased by about 10%. In terms of the year 2009, their percentages were close together but, in general, all the devices increased except conventional TVs and laptops.
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