The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph compares the

contribution

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of the IT and

Service

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industry

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the UK

GDP

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over the 8-year period.

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, both industries witnessed growth in the given time, with the IT sector surpassing

service

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production in all years. In 1992, the IT

industry

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allocated 6% of the total country's

GDP

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, which was only 2% higher than the

Service

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industry

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contribution

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. In two-year time, both industries'

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GDP

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incresead

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increased

, and with a 2% difference, the IT

industry

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surpassed its counterpart at 8%. From 1994 to 1996, the IT

industry

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's gross domestic production declined marginally to just under 8%. Meanwhile, the

service

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GDP

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remained relatively stable, at around 6%. From 1996,

however

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, the IT

industry

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grew steeper and reached 12% in 1998 before peaking at just over 14% by the end of the period. By 2000, the

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gap between the two components reached its highest, with the

service

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industry

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dedicating half of IT's share.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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GDP
consumption
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government spending
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