The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the
contribution
of the IT and
Service
industry
in
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the UK
GDP
over the 8-year period.
Overall
, both industries witnessed growth in the given time, with the IT sector surpassing
service
production in all years. In 1992, the IT
industry
allocated 6% of the total country's
GDP
, which was only 2% higher than the
Service
industry
's
contribution
. In two-year time, both industries'
contribution
to
GDP
incresead
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increased
, and with a 2% difference, the IT
industry
surpassed its counterpart at 8%. From 1994 to 1996, the IT
industry
's gross domestic production declined marginally to just under 8%. Meanwhile, the
service
's
GDP
remained relatively stable, at around 6%. From 1996,
however
, the IT
industry
grew steeper and reached 12% in 1998 before peaking at just over 14% by the end of the period. By 2000, the
contribution
gap between the two components reached its highest, with the
service
industry
dedicating half of IT's share.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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