Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it is popular and how does it affect society?
Nowadays the old stories of serial killers and their innocent victims are in vogue, especially since big companies like Netflix began producing TV
series
and films about this
topic. Why these are so popular and their impact on the
society will be discussed in Correct article usage
apply
this
essay.
Overall
, I believe that the popularity of this
Correct determiner usage
these
progammes
is proportionate to how horrific they are, the more the story is scary the more people's attention gets. Correct your spelling
programme
programmes
For example
, a few weeks ago a new series
about the Menendez's
brothers, two wealthy young adults who murdered their parents in the 80s, Change noun form
Menendez
has been
released and immediately reached the record for the Wrong verb form
was
most seen
Add a hyphen
most-seen
series
of the year. Another example is the TV series
about Jeffrey Dahmer, where explicit sanguineous scenes about him eating their victim's organs after killing them were shown.
Due to
the vision of this
content, society is influenced by it. As a result
of projecting the story of those psychopaths on the big screen, people are beginning to idolize them. For instance
, on social media a lot of young girls empathized with the previously mentioned protagonists only because they were handsome, asking for them to be released, which is a mind-blowing situation in my opinion.
In conclusion, I find this
kind of productions
particularly entertaining. Fix the agreement mistake
production
However
, I assume that they do not have a positive impact on people watching them, youngsters and influenceable in particular
. Therefore
, the possibility to watch this
kind of shows
should not be allowed Fix the agreement mistake
show
untill
a certain age has been reached.Correct your spelling
until
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task achievement
Try to provide more balanced analysis by considering both positive and negative effects.
coherence cohesion
Include a clear thesis statement in the introduction to present the main argument.
task achievement
You presented relevant and specific examples that support your points, such as the Menendez brothers and Jeffrey Dahmer series.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and clearly introduce and summarize the topic respectively.
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