The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
The two pie charts illustrate some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
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females
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of clerical or related in comparison with male
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. Craft or similar for female occupied 3 per cent
, whereas
for male this
things was 24 per cent
. Furthermore
, other manual and managerial and professional occupied for female
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females
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and 29 per cent
, although
for male
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. other non-manual
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