The graph below shows the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The line graph shows data about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in

Philippines

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the Philippines

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,

Malaysia

, Thailand and

Indonesia

in the period 1970 to 2020, with predictions for

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20 years.

Overall

, during

this

fifteen-year period,

Malaysia

remained the biggest number of citizens, with all three other countries having much less urban population than it. In 1970

Indonesia

had the least amount of people living in cities,

while

Philippines

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the Philippines

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and

Malaysia

were urbanized as much as each other.

However

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, by 2015, the gap between Thailand and

Malaysia

had narrowed and considerably more amount of people lived in cities in

Indonesia

than

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these

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two. As can be seen from the graph, the

percent

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of citizens living in

this

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these

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four regions will be increased but it rose dramatically in

Indonesia

and

Malaysia

.

The

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period between 1990 and 2010 Philippines

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lost

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its number of citizens but it started

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to rise

and will continue rising slightly.