You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the service of your BC airlines.
I booked the flight last
month for my trip to Correct article usage
the maldives
maldives
. Change the capitalization
Maldives
This
was my first time to travel with this
airline. I was so excited for
my trip because I was going with my husband. My flight was on September 23 and departure was Change preposition
about
next
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the next
day
. The day
we landed on
Maldives, we found that my Change preposition
in
bags
are
lost. I tried to find it for more than two hours Wrong verb form
were
in
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at
Airport
, but we couldn't Correct article usage
the Airport
found
the luggage. There are more than 50 people whose Wrong verb form
find
bags
were lost.After three to four hours they told us to go and they
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that they
will
contact us once they Wrong verb form
would
will find
the Wrong verb form
found
bags
. I was so upset because my all belongings and clothes were in the bags
and we were there for only 7 days. We waited for one day
, was
waiting for the phone call from Unnecessary verb
apply
airport
but couldn't Add an article
the airport
get
. So, I decided to purchase some clothes from there, I wasted my clothes on purchasing daily things. Correct pronoun usage
get it
Overall
, it spoiled my whole trip. For the seven days ,I couldn't even enjoyed
to go out with my husband. The Change the verb form
enjoy
last
,day
I got the bags
but am
extremely disappointed Wrong verb form
was
from
the service.
Hope to hear back soon.
Yours sincerely,
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task achievement
Include more specific details about the compensation you are seeking to strengthen your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your letter more clearly by separating different points into paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to improve the logical flow between your sentences.
task achievement
The letter addresses the prompt adequately by explaining the situation and the problems caused.
coherence and cohesion
Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
Your writing tone is suitable for a complaint letter.
Structure your letter
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- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.