You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation
Dear sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service of your airline because it lost my luggage in and could
not able to find it Verb problem
I have
till
date.
To be precise, I boarded one of your planes number MH 312 from Mumbai to Istanbul Change preposition
to
last
week. When I landed in Istanbul, I waited for my luggage for two hours at
Change preposition
in
luggage
section. Later, I was informed that my belongings Correct article usage
the luggage
are
still in transit. Wrong verb form
were
Airline
staff assured me to deliver it to me within two days, but they failed to do so. As I was on Correct article usage
The airline
a
holiday I was barely left with any clothes. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, I had to shop again from Istanbul that
put Correct pronoun usage
which
extra
financial burden on me.
As I have explained the whole situation in detail and because of the casual attitude of your airline staff, I had to suffer. In order to, make up for your mistake, I would appreciate Add an article
an extra
the extra
if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
pay for my overseas shopping. I hope you will look into the matter and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
JatinderWrong verb form
could
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complete response
Consider providing specific details about the financial impact (i.e., approximate cost) to strengthen your argument for compensation.
suitable writing tone
Replace 'to be precise' with a phrase like 'Specifically' or simply start with 'I boarded...' for a slightly more formal tone.
logical structure
Consider using a concluding sentence before your closing, summarizing your expectation for a response.
complete response
Your letter addresses all parts of the prompt: complaining, explaining problems, and seeking compensation.
logical structure
You've logically structured the letter with clear sections, making it easy to follow.
greeting and closing
Your greeting ("Dear sir") and closing ("Yours faithfully, Jatinder") are appropriate and courteous.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph maintains a single main idea, contributing to clarity.
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