You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

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Dear sir, I hope

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letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service of your airline because it lost my luggage in and

could

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not able to find it

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date. To be precise, I boarded one of your planes number MH 312 from Mumbai to Istanbul

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week. When I landed in Istanbul, I waited for my luggage for two hours

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luggage

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the luggage

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section. Later, I was informed that my belongings

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still in transit.

Airline

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The airline

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staff assured me to deliver it to me within two days, but they failed to do so. As I was on

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apply

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holiday I was barely left with any clothes.

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, I had to shop again from Istanbul

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put

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financial burden on me. As I have explained the whole situation in detail and because of the casual attitude of your airline staff, I had to suffer. In order to, make up for your mistake, I would appreciate

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you

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pay for my overseas shopping. I hope you will look into the matter and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder

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complete response

Consider providing specific details about the financial impact (i.e., approximate cost) to strengthen your argument for compensation.

suitable writing tone

Replace 'to be precise' with a phrase like 'Specifically' or simply start with 'I boarded...' for a slightly more formal tone.

logical structure

Consider using a concluding sentence before your closing, summarizing your expectation for a response.

complete response

Your letter addresses all parts of the prompt: complaining, explaining problems, and seeking compensation.

logical structure

You've logically structured the letter with clear sections, making it easy to follow.

greeting and closing

Your greeting ("Dear sir") and closing ("Yours faithfully, Jatinder") are appropriate and courteous.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph maintains a single main idea, contributing to clarity.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

dissatisfaction
luggage handling
emotional stress
essential items
financial strain
replacement items
compensation
refund
monetary compensation
inconvenience
suitable solution
customer service
reimbursement
troubling experience
resolve

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