The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
male
population with smoking habit in seven different countries in two Add an article
the male
variount
periods.
Correct your spelling
various
variant
Overall
, percentage
of males who smoke decreased, which was around 43% in 2000 and Correct article usage
the percentage
then
it declined to reach approximately 33% in 2015.
In regard to countries which have a drope
Correct your spelling
drop
on
its percentage, Bangladesh had the highest gap with over 60% Change preposition
in
smoker
in 2000 and the percentage went down to reach almost 39% in 2015. Fix the agreement mistake
smokers
In addition
, America,Mexico and Australia also
had a decreased
in male smoking Replace the word
decrease
whith
12%,15% and 11% , respectively. Cuba showed no significant difference in the proportion of male smoking in the country with a Correct your spelling
with
slightly
decline Change the adverb
slight
around
only 2%.
Change preposition
of around
According to
the countries which had an increase in smokin
numbers, Egypt was the highest which became 49% . Correct your spelling
smoking
additionally
, Lebanon had 35% of male smokers in 2000 and following that it had rocketed to reach 44% in 2015.Submitted by 361109698 on
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