The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph demonstrates the proportion of visitors who visited four different tourist attractions in Brighton, England between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that the Pier and Pavilion's tourists decreased
while
those visiting the Art Gallery indicated a decline. At the same time, the percentage of people who came to the Art Gallery remained steady from 1980 to 2010.
To begin
with, the ratio of visitors coming to see the Pier and Pavilion revealed growing numbers
although
fluctuation happened year by year. Pier, which became the least interactive in 1980, saw a rise, from 10% in 1980 to above 20% in 2010. Pavilion reached its peak, at almost 50% in 1995, before it plumbed into approximately 30% in 2010, but it still showed an incline.
In contrast
, the number of Art Gallery's guests dropped dramatically, from 20% in 1980 to under 10% in 2010, even though there was an 18% growth in 1985. There is a steadiness of people who came to Festivals, at around 30%.
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