Many manfuactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products shpuld be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree ?

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lot

of

companies

make both

food

and

drinks

with high

level

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levels

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of

sugar

. Which can lead to many side effects on health. It is

also

possible to say that sugary

products price

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product prices

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should be increased to encourage

people

to consume less

sugar

. To

being

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begin

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with,

food

and

drinks

nowadays

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are producted

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producted

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produced

with high

amount

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amounts

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of fat and

sugar

which cause a

lot

of health issues to

people

.

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,

small

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a small

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bottle of any soft drink

contain

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more than 30

gram

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grams

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of

sugar

which is really

disaster

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a disaster

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for health.

Moreover

, many

companies

focused

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focus

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on sweets to increase

there

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their

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income rapidly,

while

they do not care about human beings. For

examples

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manfuctured

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manufactured

produce healthy

food

in the world and more than 10000

companies

produce unhealthy

food

. In terms of, increasing the

sugary

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sugar

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and sweets

price

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prices

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to encourage

people

to stop buying those staff, it is possible to say

this

solution can be used.

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, the UK government in the previous year, increased the fast

food

meals by 30% and

this

increment will be as

donation

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a donation

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for the poor

people

,

hence

, a

lot

of

people

encourage

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were encouraged

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to stop buying those fast

food

meals.

Moreover

, as much as the person

spending

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spends

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his money on

sweety

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sweet

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food

as much as he will cost the government a

lot

of money

one

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once

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he

became

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becomes

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an

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apply

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old. to clarify, fast

food

exist

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in urban countries

before

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80 years

, a

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ago, a

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lot

of surveys have been done in hospitals to see the

patients

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patient's

patients'

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attitude

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and they found most of those patients tend to eat fast

food

more than 4 times a week. In conclusion, there is no denying that many

companies

production of

food

and

drinks

contain high

amount

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amounts

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of

sugar

,

therefore

, each government should add tax on each sugary

food

and

drinks

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drink

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to help

people

to

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apply

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quit

of

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apply

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those things.

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essay

agree

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on

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with

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this

statement since it will encourage

people

to be healthy.