The chart below displays the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
This
essay represents the percentage of people who hired or bought the
house in England
Correct article usage
a
Overall
, quantity
of Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
resident
in owned households Fix the agreement mistake
residents
accommodation
speedily than rented accommodation which dramatically .
1918 the Replace the word
accommodates
occupied
was lifted Replace the word
occupation
about
78% percent. Change preposition
by about
Then
it matched between 1939 to 1953. From 1961 to 1981 it significantly decreased to 35 percentage
. In 2011 there was a slight go up in rented households and it was up to 38% .
The same Replace the word
per cent
yeas
the owned ones Correct your spelling
year
has
shot up from 21% Change the verb form
have
32
% in 1918 to 1958. Change preposition
to 32
Then
it leveled of
between 1939 to 1953 the was a graduate stade in the percentage. Replace the word
off
Then
it starts to move upward to 69% in the 1991. At
2001 to 2011 there was a plummet in the owned quarters and it was 62%
Generally, both Change preposition
From
of
rented and owned Change preposition
apply
has
skyrocketed and dropped Correct subject-verb agreement
have
though
the years from 1918 to 2011 .Correct your spelling
through
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