The chart below displays the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below displays the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
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essay represents the percentage of people who hired or bought
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house in England
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of
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in owned households
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speedily than rented accommodation which dramatically . 1918 the
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was lifted
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78% percent.
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it matched between 1939 to 1953. From 1961 to 1981 it significantly decreased to 35
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. In 2011 there was a slight go up in rented households and it was up to 38% . The same
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the owned ones
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shot up from 21%
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% in 1918 to 1958.
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it leveled
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between 1939 to 1953 the was a graduate stade in the percentage.
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it starts to move upward to 69% in the 1991.
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2001 to 2011 there was a plummet in the owned quarters and it was 62% Generally, both
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rented and owned
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skyrocketed and dropped
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the years from 1918 to 2011 .
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