The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60 - 64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagrams below illustrate the number of employers who keep working

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the age

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60 and 64 years old in four countries from 1970 to 2000.

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, the

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of men dramatically exceeds the

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of women.

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the first chart, the

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of workers has remarkably grown for thirty years since it was recorded in 1970. Especially, in Belgium, the transformation is the most significant with 80% has been escalated.

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, there are no countries whose quantity of female workers is as high as Japan. The proportion in other countries is quite similar. Following the next chart, the

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of employers in Belgium is lowest

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7% in 1970 and one more

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in 2000.

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, the Japanese have reached the top once again with 43% in 2000 and the USA is still in the second stage in the same year despite the reduction.

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, the trend of working at retirement age decreased in Australia, down to 2%. In conclusion, men tend to work longer than women.

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, the more old people continue

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to work

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, the more the lack of young

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labour

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.