The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal  between 1967 and 2007
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The presented line chart compares data about how much Carbon dioxide per person in 4 various countries namely, the United Kingdom ,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal generated from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of the UK and
Sweden
, which had a lot of CO2 emissions,
instead
of the other countries reduced interval by 40 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, Britania, the main country that manufactured CO2, hit roughly 11;
then
it declined slightly to nearly 9. The second global area was
Sweden
which reached just over 8 in 1967;
thereafter
, it climbed and scored the peak at 10;
however
, it went down significantly to 6 in 2007. The graph demonstrates that in the beginning, Italy touched approximately 4 and after that, it jumped moderately and recorded the same amount as
Sweden
in 1987 at 7. Later it rose marginally to 8 in 2007. The
last
country was Portugal;
additionally
, it reported almost 1 in 1967;
then
it leapt somewhat to the figure that was roughly the same as
Sweden
in 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average emissions per person
  • trends
  • reduction
  • increase
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • pivotal years
  • industrial growth
  • policy changes
  • economic changes
  • energy sources
  • technology advancements
  • environmental policies
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