The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacture of a biofuel called ethanol.
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a chemical process consisting of 3 main steps, starting with trees getting energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide and finishing with public vehicles releasing the carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
Having looked at the diagram for more details, we can see that first of all, the crop is qualified to be harvested by a harvester. Linking Words
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, these plants experience pre-processing in factories where they are crushed in mills and changed to cellulose. Linking Words
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the processed cellulose will undergo chemical processes and be converted to sugar.
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, the process continues with the sugars combined with added microbes and producing ethanol. After that, Linking Words
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amount of ethanol is used for operating public transport. Linking Words
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these public vehicles send out carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Linking Words
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gas is synthesized with sunlight with the goal of providing energy to the plants and Linking Words
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cycle continues again forever.Linking Words
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