You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the
distrubution
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distribution
between
popularity
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the popularity
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of different transport types used by children aged 11 to 16
by
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on
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their journey to
the
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apply
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school.
Firstly
, it can be seen that short
distances
up to 1 mile are mostly preferred to travel by
feet
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foot
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or bicycle.
Also
, it could be noted, that travelling
such
distance by
car
or
bus
is
quet
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quite
quiet
unpoplular
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unpopular
.
Similar
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A similar
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trend saves for
the
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distances
from 1 to 2 miles, but moving by bike is more popular than walking. in
this
segment
car
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cars
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and
bus
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buses
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are
quet
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quite
quiet
unpoplular
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unpopular
popular
too.
On the other hand
, dealing with longer
distances
is more common with
car
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cars
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or
bus
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buses
show examples
. Actually, there are some students eager to walk or bike 2-5 miles, but nobody prefers to travel more than 5 miles at all.
Such
a
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apply
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long
distanses
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distances
distance
are followed by
car
or
bus
and a
bus
is about two times more popular.
To sum up
with
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apply
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, the visual shows a lot of useful information which tells how students prefer to get
for
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to
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the
shool
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school
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in
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apply
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a different
distances
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words distances, car, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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