The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

In the

last

few years, western society witnessed an improvement in the percentage of overweight

children

by almost 20%. In

this

essay, I will discuss the main causes of

obesity

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problem

and how to solve

children

from

this

problem

. To commence with the problems,

first,

children

do not practise enough sport in their

day

, sitting all

the

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day

from home to school makes their

movemonet

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movement

movements

hard and

slowly

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, which can lead to

the

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obesity.

second,

modern transport encourages them to not walk and reach their destination by

restting

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resting

restating

on

vehicle's

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benches, walking is

the

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a

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significant part

in

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humans

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health that if anyone

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avoid

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, it will back on them with different diseases.

For instance

,

parents

who rely on buses to reach their

children

to school because they are more safe.

Finally

, fast food that nowadays

kids

consume

it

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in

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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way. When we talk about solutions for the first

problem

,

school

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schools

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should add a fitness class every

day

and teach

children

how to practise sports and its importance,

parents

can

also

help by joining

kids

in sports clubs.

For example

, every football club offer a small club for

children

to learn how to play football and improve their skills. Government can solve the second

problem

through

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by

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adding safe and wider walking paths in

nighbourhoods

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neighbourhoods

and public streets. As for the

last

problem

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parents

can help by making three meals each

day

for their

kids

and

give

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them lessons about the disadvantages of fast food eating. The community can

also

help by providing more healthy restaurants. In conclusion, the large number of overweight

children

is increasing

from

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due to

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the bad habits that

children

are

get

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used to

it

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such

as sports they practise, transportation they depend on and daily food. We can help to decrease the large number by giving

advices

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for

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to

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government

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the government

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, schools and the most significant ones

parents

to enhance

kids

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kids'

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life

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.