The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided maps compare the changes of a university campus that have just been made recently to that of 2010.
Overall
, several buildings are improved and changed,
while
some others are demolished and perished. Looking at the map in 2010, there are
student
accommodation
and university offices buildings at the top left corner of the map adjacent to the road which looks like alphabet “L”. On the other side, there is
student
accommodation
, a teaching block (arts and science), shops and restaurants, surrounding the lake and lawn & seating areas.
On the other hand
, if we look at the map now, the features are different, they have undergone several changes.
Student
accommodation
buildings are located in one area close to each other. The university offices,
however
, have been demolished and changed into a science building.
Similarly
, the teaching block (arts & science) is
also
converted into a single art building and is improved to be more sophisticated.
This
also
comes
also
come to shops and a restaurant which are replaced by a modern
student
accommodation
flat
that is
connected to a new road.
Moreover
,
although
the lake remains there, the lawn & seating area have been eradicated, which
then
only several additional trees growing there.
Furthermore
, because the
student
accommodation
building near the lake is changing place,
this
site is
then
built into a fancy
student
facilities building.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words student, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • campus
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • sustainable
  • accessibility
  • layout
  • pedestrian zones
  • transportation routes
  • parking facilities
  • greenery
  • sports center
  • lecture halls
  • demolition
  • modernize
  • expansion
  • enhancement
  • comprehensive development
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