The table show the results of surveys in a European country, carried out in three different years. Percentage of respondents expressing interest in certain sports

The table show the results of surveys in a European country, carried out in three different years. Percentage of respondents expressing interest in certain sports
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The presented table compares data about the proportion of the British who answered the surveys about 6 various sports that people liked at 3 different times namely, 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that some sports like
Rugby
, Cricket, and Swimming
instead
of others had increasing trend interval by 20 years.
According to
the graph, at the start, football, the most popular item between communities, hit 59%;
then
it reduced slightly to 56% in 2010. The second one was Golf which had the same portion from 1990 and 2000 at 28%;
then
its percentage of 2% declined in 2010. The third one was Swimming, which reached 15% in 1990;
moreover
, its fashion rose and touched the vertex at 18% in 2000;
however
, it fell to 16% in 2010. The picture demonstrates that not only
Rugby
but
also
Cricket scored the same proportion in 1990 at 12%;
thereafter
, in 2000,
Rugby
8% climbed , yet Cricket 's fraction was absolutely equal to in 1990. Later both of them jumped, so
Rugby
recorded 24% and another one hit 14%.
In contrast
, the Judo trend went down from 9% in 1990 to a tiny fraction in 2010.
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