The graph below gives information about the percentage of the populationin four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The illustration shows the percentage of residents from four Asian countries;
Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia which are living in the cities from period
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of
1970 to 2040.
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Overall
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Malaysia
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on
the metropolitan. Meanwhile, Change preposition
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Thailand
has the lowest expected of individuals who will reside at
the urban area.
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the Philippines
Malaysia
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with roughly more or equal to 30% of individuals. Continually, Malaysia
's urban population consistently will rise until 2040 with of
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However
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On the one hand, Thailand
and Indonesia were nearly tied on
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on
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growed
increasingly up till 2040 with 60% foreseen occupants Correct your spelling
grew
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area. Thailand
remained the
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