The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The line graph illustrates the amount of using
water
for agriculture, industrial use and domestic use between 1900 and 2000.
While
the table demonstrates population, ırriated land and
water
consumpition
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consumption
per person values for Brazil and
Democratic
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the Democratic
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Republic of Congo in 2000.
Overall
, Using
water
for agriculture always had the highest amount from the beginning of the period until the. The table illustrates information about the population and
water
consumptionn
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consumption
per person. In the
graph
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graph,
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it is seen that the amount of
water
usage
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used
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for
Ariculture
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Agriculture
slightly increased from 1900 to 1950 After
than
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that
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it rose gradually and had a top with almost 3000 km3 in 2000.
For industrial
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Industrial
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usage remained
constatntl
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constant
constantly
between 1900 and 1930. After 1930 it started to rise until the end of the period with
closely
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close
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1200
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to 1200
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km3. Domestic usage remained
constantly
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constant
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from the
begining
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beginning
until
the
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apply
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1960
than
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then
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started
increase
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to increase
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slightly and had a top with almost 500 km3 in 2000. The table shows that Brazil had 176 million people
while
the Congo had 5.2 million in 2000
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • distribution
  • agriculture
  • industry
  • domestic
  • sector
  • trends
  • discrepancies
  • sustainability
  • resource management
  • environmental impact
  • efficient
  • scarce
  • irrigation
  • desalination
  • sanitation
  • water-intensive
  • renewable resource
  • per capita
  • infrastructure
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