The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The line graph illustrates the amount of using

water

for agriculture, industrial use and domestic use between 1900 and 2000.

While

the table demonstrates population, ırriated land and

water

consumpition

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consumption

per person values for Brazil and

Democratic

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the Democratic

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Republic of Congo in 2000.

Overall

, Using

water

for agriculture always had the highest amount from the beginning of the period until the. The table illustrates information about the population and

water

consumptionn

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consumption

per person. In the

graph

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graph,

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it is seen that the amount of

water

usage

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used

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for

Ariculture

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Agriculture

slightly increased from 1900 to 1950 After

than

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that

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it rose gradually and had a top with almost 3000 km3 in 2000.

For industrial

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Industrial

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usage remained

constatntl

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constant

constantly

between 1900 and 1930. After 1930 it started to rise until the end of the period with

closely

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1200

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to 1200

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km3. Domestic usage remained

constantly

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constant

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from the

begining

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beginning

until

the

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apply

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1960

than

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then

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started

increase

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to increase

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slightly and had a top with almost 500 km3 in 2000. The table shows that Brazil had 176 million people

while

the Congo had 5.2 million in 2000

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption
distribution
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industry
domestic
sector
trends
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sustainability
resource management
environmental impact
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desalination
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renewable resource
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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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