The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The line graph illustrates the amount of using
water
for agriculture, industrial use and domestic use between 1900 and 2000. While
the table demonstrates population, ırriated land and water
consumpition
per person values for Brazil and Correct your spelling
consumption
Democratic
Republic of Congo in 2000.
Correct article usage
the Democratic
Overall
, Using water
for agriculture always had the highest amount from the beginning of the period until the. The table illustrates information about the population and water
consumptionn
per person.
In the Correct your spelling
consumption
graph
it is seen that the amount of Add a comma
graph,
water
usage
for Replace the word
used
Ariculture
slightly increased from 1900 to 1950 After Correct your spelling
Agriculture
than
it rose gradually and had a top with almost 3000 km3 in 2000. Correct word choice
that
For industrial
usage remained Change preposition
Industrial
constatntl
between 1900 and 1930. After 1930 it started to rise until the end of the period with Correct your spelling
constant
constantly
closely
Change the word
close
1200
km3. Domestic usage remained Change preposition
to 1200
constantly
from the Change the word
constant
begining
until Correct your spelling
beginning
the
1960 Change the article
apply
than
started Correct your spelling
then
increase
slightly and had a top with almost 500 km3 in 2000.
The table shows that Brazil had 176 million people Fix the infinitive
to increase
while
the Congo had 5.2 million in 2000Submitted by e.yildizhundur on
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