The graph below gives information about the percentage of the populationin four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart displays the percentage of the amount of people who lived in urban areas in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia. From the 70s to 2020.
Also
, the prediction results of
2030 and 2040.
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Overall
, it is clear that
all four cities have shown an increase
in the number of citizens who are living in them. And it is predicted that it will increase
even more in the next 20 years.
Looking at the information in more detail. In 1970 the country who has the highest population who lived in cities was Malaysia . With 30% of residents. And it kept increasing dramatically to reach 70% of the whole population. In contrast
, Philippines
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the Philippines
has
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during
1970 to 2010 at nearly 42% . And it is predicted that it will Change preposition
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increase
slightly in the few next years.
Moreover
, both Thailand and Indonesia were under 20% of residents who
living in cities. Correct pronoun usage
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However
, Indonesia has increased significantly to reach almost 50% of people who live in urban areas. While
Thailand increased steadily in city's
residents at 37%. Both countries were predicted to Change noun form
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increase
in the next 20 years.Submitted by reem.rz112 on
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