Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates some shifts of the information in three categories
population
growth
, average birth and life
expectancy
in different incomes between 2002 and 2004 .
Overall
, as can be seen, Low income
had the largest population
. While
high income
had fewer Portion of percentage. However
, in
average Change preposition
on
population
growth
had nearly the same points in high and middle
income
.
It is clear that
low countries had a significant population
growth
in 2002 and 2004 from 1.8% to 200% . Moreover
,the average of women births in both years was around 3.8 to 3.7 .In addition
, the life
expectancy
was the lowest percentage for two years remained
at the same point between 58.1 and 58.8 of Wrong verb form
remaining
life
expectancy
while
in
Change preposition
apply
middle
and high were the biggest figures.
On the other hand
, for high and middle
had nearly same
number in the two categories in the Correct article usage
the same
middle
countries was dominant 2 years around 0.9% more than the high income
was 0.8%. to 0.7% of population
growth
. In addition
, in the middle
income
the average birth per woman was bigger than in high countries. Add a comma
income,
Finally
, by 2002 and 2004 the life
expectancy
was the highest number around 78.0 to 78.7. while
In the middle
were Fewer points.Submitted by almay
on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, growth, life, expectancy, income, middle with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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