the graph gives information on the number of participants for different activities in melbourn in australia for the period from 2000 to 2020

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for five different activities Thermoclub, Martial Arts, Amateur, Jointist,

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, and Music performance between 2000 and 2020 at

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social center in Australia.

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, Thermoclub and Martial Arts were almost

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the same number over the period,

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and Musical performance, which appeared at 25, underwent an increase

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' number. The amateur dramatics was the only one which decreased during the period. In 2000, the number of people who participated in Thermoclub was 65,

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it witnessed a

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decrease in 2010 to

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16. It increased again to reach approximately 70

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almost the same value over the period, around 48, in 2015 it was overtaken by

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activity to become the third common activity.

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began with only 15

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2000 and was the least common activity until 2005

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when Musical

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appeared with almost no

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at all. both of them kept increasing to reach

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second and fourth place at 55 and 16

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respectively.

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the amateur starts at 28, once only, increased slightly,

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starts decreasing

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25. By 2020, it had reached less than 10

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