the graph gives information on the number of participants for different activities in melbourn in australia for the period from 2000 to 2020
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
participants
for five different activities Thermoclub, Martial Arts, Amateur, Jointist, Table
Tennis
, and Music performance between 2000 and 2020 at specific
social center in Australia.
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a specific
Overall
, Thermoclub and Martial Arts were almost taking
the same number over the period, Verb problem
apply
while
Table
Tennis
and Musical performance, which appeared at 25, underwent an increase of
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in
participants
' number. The amateur dramatics was the only one which decreased during the period.
In 2000, the number of people who participated in Thermoclub was 65, although
it witnessed a slightly
decrease in 2010 to Change the adverb
slight
become
16. It increased again to reach approximately 70 Verb problem
apply
at
2020. Despite Change preposition
in
the
Martial Arts Correct article usage
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kept
almost the same value over the period, around 48, in 2015 it was overtaken by Wrong verb form
keeping
Table
Tennis
activity to become the third common activity.
Table
Tennis
began with only 15 participants
at
2000 and was the least common activity until 2005Change preposition
in
,
when Musical Remove the comma
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performance
appeared with almost no Fix the agreement mistake
performances
participants
at all. both of them kept increasing to reach the
second and fourth place at 55 and 16 Correct article usage
apply
participants
respectively.
while
the amateur starts at 28, once only, increased slightly, then
starts decreasing in
25. By 2020, it had reached less than 10 Change preposition
at
participants
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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