33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The supplied bar chart demonstrates how many
students
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tended to study in a
European
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university
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from four various countries over a four-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
number
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of
applicants
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for studying at a
European
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university
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were from China and America.
However
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, Russian
students
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did not apply
for studying
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in Europe over the period. In 2004, the
number
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of
students
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who were from China and tended to study in Europe was nearly 27000, (which was the highest
number
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of
applicants
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over the period) just ahead of American
students
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at roughly 26000 in 2008.
Moreover
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, the
number
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of American
applicants
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that a
European
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university
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had was exactly 15000 in 2005 which was the same as Chinese
students
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in 2008.
In contrast
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, the
European
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university
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had approximately 1000
applicants
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from Russia in 2004. (which was the lowest
number
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of
students
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over the whole year).
Furthermore
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, the percentage of
applicants
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who were from Japan was precisely 5000 in 2004 which
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doubled in 2008 and reached 10000
applicants
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existed
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in a
European
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country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, european, university, number, applicants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • comparison
  • applicant numbers
  • peak years
  • growth
  • decline
  • pattern
  • influence
  • factors
  • diplomatic relationships
  • economic conditions
  • demand
  • convergence
  • divergence
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