33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The supplied bar chart demonstrates how many
students
tended to study in a European
university
from four various countries over a four-year period.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest number
of applicants
for studying at a European
university
were from China and America. However
, Russian students
did not apply for studying
in Europe over the period.
In 2004, the Change preposition
to study
number
of students
who were from China and tended to study in Europe was nearly 27000, (which was the highest number
of applicants
over the period) just ahead of American students
at roughly 26000 in 2008. Moreover
, the number
of American applicants
that a European
university
had was exactly 15000 in 2005 which was the same as Chinese students
in 2008.
In contrast
, the European
university
had approximately 1000 applicants
from Russia in 2004. (which was the lowest number
of students
over the whole year). Furthermore
, the percentage of applicants
who were from Japan was precisely 5000 in 2004 which was
doubled in 2008 and reached 10000 Unnecessary verb
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