The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The diagram illustrates how
ethanol
, which is a biofuel product, is made.
Overall
, after plants
receive enough sunlight and carbon
dioxide
from vehicles, they grow and are collected by special machines. Then
, after producing cellulose by
Change preposition
in
pre-processing
stage, it undergoes Correct article usage
the pre-processing
to
processing with chemicals at Change preposition
apply
factory
to produce sugars. These sugars are mixed with microbes to produce Add an article
the factory
ethanol
, which used
as fuel Add a missing verb
is used
to
transportation means.
Cars, planes, and different vehicles that use biofuel to operate produce a high amount of Change preposition
for
carbon
dioxide
to
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in
environment
. Add an article
the environment
Carbon
dioxide
is considered an essential nutrient or source of energy to plants
, which they use it
with sunlight to grow. The grown Correct pronoun usage
apply
plants
are harvested by special vehicles or methods to go to pre-processing
stage, where the Add an article
the pre-processing
plants
are converted to cellulose, which is the project who
will undergo to real process. After the processing, sugars are produced. At Correct pronoun usage
that
this
stage, microbes are added to complete the production of biofuel, ethanol
. After the ethanol
is produced, it is used by many different transportation methods. To supply them with energy that important
to operate them, Add a missing verb
is important
which
they Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
produce carbon
dioxide
again.Submitted by adianalmozan on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, plants, carbon, dioxide with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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