The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New

Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
The finances
for
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a New Zealandian diplomat
is
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depicted in the presented graph in an interval between 2012 and 2022.
Overall
, the rates revenue was his major expense and it increased in a stable trend,
while
the cost of borrowings
flactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
fluctuates
sporadically. Rates revenue increased almost steadily. Starting from 1400 in 2012, it went up and peaked at 2400 in 2022.
Similarily
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, the user charge had the same trend except
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it started
fom
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from
1000 in 2012 and peaked at 2000 in 2022.
Conversely
, borrowings
and
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grants and subsidies did not experience the same thing. Borrowings
flactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
around 1000. There were moments of soaring and plummeting.
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between 2012 and 2014 it rose from 800 to 1300 between 2012 and 2014 and
then
it went down to around 600 just
befor
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before
2017.
In contrast
, grants and subsidies were almost constant except for a period that
it
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saw a
rising
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and
falling
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fall
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between 2016 and 2017.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • significant
  • revenue
  • expenditure
  • surpass
  • align
  • trend
  • stability
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • forecast
  • decline
  • rise
  • consistent
  • notable
  • growth
  • factors
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